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Ode to Jon: A poem for a friend of mine.
Posted by Douglas, Nov 6, 2008. 1542 views. ID = 1978

Ode to Jon

Posted by Douglas, Nov 6, 2008. 1542 views. ID = 1978
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That Jon's a slob who eats too fast -
He doesn't stop to chew his food,
He shovels in from first to last,
It really is absurdly rude!
One day as Jon devoured steak,
His fork, it gave a little slip,
And that, my friends, was his mistake,
That silly boy has pierced his lip!

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Douglas
Nov 6, 2008
He actually pierced his lip on purpose (I think). My initial comment to him was, "I told you to be careful where you point that screwdriver," but then I thought of this instead. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Nov 6, 2008



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