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vessels

vessels's Writer Profile Page. ID = 295

Writing

Just me today (Sep 18, 2012)
Give It Up! (Mar 29, 2011)
Personality Makeover (Oct 18, 2010)
Dreamland (Oct 13, 2010)
Falling Leaves (Sep 16, 2010)
Periodic Table (Jul 7, 2010)
Writer's Block (Sep 22, 2009)
Alphabet Soup - U (Jul 13, 2009)
Recipe for Disaster? (Apr 7, 2009)

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A Foolish Choice (Jun 7, 2012)

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Douglas
Oct 1, 2008
Hi vessels! I'm not sure if I've ever given you a proper welcome to the site, so let me say: WELCOME! :)

I just read your cat piece, and I wanted to give you a small suggestion which will make your writing more appealing for others to read: if you put in some paragraph breaks (a double-line space) where appropriate, it'll make people more interested in reading what you've written.

Internet attention span is, just by the nature of the beast, a short-attention-span media, and when people see one huge paragraph, it tends to make them shy away.

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