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Jun 12, 2008
I was also going to ask you if you lived in France, but I see Doug beat me to it. :-) If you don't mind me asking, is French your primary language?
Jun 7, 2008
|Well, your writing is quite good for someone whose second language is English. I do notice, once in awhile, odd quirks like adjectives used in place of adverbs, or things along those lines. I can point those out if I spot them, if that's something you're interested in correcting, but I won't bother if you're not really interested in going back and fixing those kinds of things. :)|
Here's an example: "Even walking along the beach was already very enjoying"
Probably should be "Even walking along the beach was already very enjoyable"
Jun 6, 2008
|Hi! I see you were able to make it back into the site. From the things you've written, I assume you live in France? Is English your second language? Just curious...|