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Easter Sunday
Posted by fluffyfoo, Mar 22. 125 views. ID = 899
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Nobody's writing on the site this week and i think it's because this week is Easter week and everyone is driving to have spend Easter with grandparents and relatives. My brother Jeff lives in Mishigan and he's coming home today and my sister Elen is home from college.
Tomorow we'll have a speshal Ester breakfast and we'll go to church then we'll have a big ham dinner and there'll be alot of people around.
This week Sundays my favorite day of the week, but next week it migt be something diffrent.
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Douglas
Mar 22 | I think I may have mentioned this before, but watch out for your contractions. We will gets contracted to "we'll" instead of "well". There are a few other contractions in there to watch out for.
And a few spelling mistakes here and there, like "Easter"
Otherwise, good piece, and it gave me the idea for next week's writing prompt.
~Posted by Douglas, Mar 22 |
fluffyfoo
Mar 23 | I always forget thse
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