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Only get better: sad poem.
Posted by Sara Taylor, Mar 1, 2008. 287 views. ID = 702
 
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Only get better

Posted by Sara Taylor, Mar 1, 2008. 287 views. ID = 702
This post was written in 3 minutes.
I'm crushed. So I had to get my thoughts down.
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The thunder is rolling loud
you can barely hear your voice
your worlds turning upside down
and so are you but you have no choice

you thought the rain was at it's worst
then the hail came falling down
you look for a shelter for hours and hours
but there are none for miles around

so the sun has already set
but the clouds are covering the moon
now you're cold and ever wet
you're bound to find some place soon

you weren't prepared for all this rain
you weren't ready for stormy weather
but there's still a hope that you cling to
for things can only get better.

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The Purple Power
Mar 1, 2008
really good VISUAL poem...i like it...!
   ~Posted by The Purple Power, Mar 1, 2008






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