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Not quite an angel: Poem I wrote for my sister
Posted by Sara Taylor, Mar 2, 2008. 1234 views. ID = 720

Not quite an angel

Posted by Sara Taylor, Mar 2, 2008. 1234 views. ID = 720
This post was written in 2 minutes.
hahaha... This popped in my head and I loved the idea so I wrote about it lol.
This post has been awarded 12 stars by 3 readers.

You may be sweet
you may be kind
are you really that one?
that angel of mine?
well your wings are rather tattered
and your robe rather worn
your halo's rather tilted
as it's hanging off your horn
you may be angelic
but I can read your mind
after all you're just my sister
you're not that hard to find
so you lock me outta your room
make me fetch your food
you're on the computer all day long
and dramatically changing your mood
but you still never leave me
you're just so very faithful
you may be a wonderful sister
but not quite an angel :P

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Mathax
Mar 2, 2008
Mine is deffinetly not an angel.
   ~Posted by Mathax, Mar 2, 2008



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