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If only she'd understand: a poem about my mom.
Posted by Sara Taylor, Feb 24, 2008. 318 views. ID = 655
 
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If only she'd understand

Posted by Sara Taylor, Feb 24, 2008. 318 views. ID = 655
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Well... let's see...this is a poem I wrote about my mom... turns out, as soon as I told her I liked someone she hated the idea even if she didn't meet him... so yeah, I'm not able to talk to her about anything as far as that goes...and it's hard because, she's like the most important person in my life and all I want is her countenance and advice....but w/e...guess it's just between God and me in this one..

but don't get me wrong...I still love my mom to death, but yeah...it would be nice if I could tell her what's on my mind..
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she just doesn't understand
the feelings that I feel
that what I have isn't infatuation
but a genuine love that's real
that you're all that matters to me
everything is just nothing
but we have a lack of communication
she doesn't understand a thing
if only she'd hear my words
see through, passed, my eyes
notice all the effort that
I put into all my tries
then maybe I'd have a chance
to show what I feel inside
and life would be easier
and I wouldn't feel so confined
we'd be able to talk about things
take eachother's hand
become bestest of friends
if only she'd understand

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