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Don't let go: Poem about not letting go.
Posted by Sara Taylor, Mar 8, 2008. 1651 views. ID = 809

Don't let go

Posted by Sara Taylor, Mar 8, 2008. 1651 views. ID = 809
This post was written in 1 minutes.
I have no idea when I wrote this...I know it was one of the first poems I've ever written...so hope you like it. lol.
This post has been awarded 16 stars by 4 readers.

you hold me in your arms
and I don't want to move
you hold me in your arms
tightly close to you
and the warmth I feel
makes me know all wounds will heal,
if there's one thing I want you to know....
it's I don't want you to let go.

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Hannah
Mar 10, 2008
I've tried to rhyme my poems but it always sounds forced, which it is. This is very good.
   ~Posted by Hannah, Mar 10, 2008



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