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First Car Ride: Short poem
Posted by Scribbler, Oct 3, 2010. 267 views. ID = 3951
 
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First Car Ride

Posted by Scribbler, Oct 3, 2010. 267 views. ID = 3951
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I don't really have any significant 'first car' memories...but I do remember being car sick quite regularly as a young child.
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My first ride in a motor car was with my gran and grandpapa.
Such a huge and shining thing with sides so long just like a wing.
In I clambered, all excited. I was so thrilled to be invited.
I stared right out to watch the scene, but then I turned a shade of green.
Stop! Stop! I cried. I'm feeling sick. My mouth is dry. My tongue is thick.
The car pulled over near the gutter, and then my gran was heard to mutter:
What's wrong with him? Poor little chap. And then I lost it in her lap.

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This post has been awarded 13 stars by 4 readers.
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