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Autumn Leaves
Posted by Scribbler, Mar 15, 2009. 1415 views. ID = 2456
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The leaves all quiver in the autumn breeze
Already changing colour as the days
Are growing shorter, cooler as they pass.
Then comes a time the leaves let loose their hold.
The tree shakes off its shimmering coat of gold.
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Comments
Douglas
Mar 15, 2009 | I like this. :) I like how you used slant rhymes (rhymes that aren't quite rhymes) for the first three lines, and then finished off with a couplet, which helps give it a feeling of being "complete."
~Posted by Douglas, Mar 15, 2009 |
Douglas
Mar 15, 2009 | Oh, and you spelled "Autumn" wrong in the title. ;)
~Posted by Douglas, Mar 15, 2009 |
Scribbler
Mar 15, 2009 | Oops! Title fixed.
Thanks for the comment.
~Posted by Scribbler, Mar 15, 2009 | 
Daisy
Mar 17, 2009 | This was a great example that helped me alot! And what a lovely image it gave me.
~Posted by Daisy, Mar 17, 2009 |
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