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Hospital visit
Posted by Scribbler, Jul 14, 2008. 873 views. ID = 1482
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We hastened to the hospital-
We went to see young Billy.
He hadn’t meant to hurt himself
In fact he’d just been silly.
His mum stood by the bedside,
Feeling quite perplexed.
Dad looked down at Billy
And said, “Whatever next?”
He'd built a model glider
For his second favouirite ted,
But when he tried to fly his bear
He launched himself instead!
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Comments
Douglas
Jul 15, 2008 | Cute!
~Posted by Douglas, Jul 15, 2008 | 
Rabbit Stu
Jul 16, 2008 | I like your rhymes here - they work smoothly, and they're just the right distance apart, IMO!
~Posted by Rabbit Stu, Jul 16, 2008 |
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