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Onomatopoeia Poem: A Little Rain won't Hurt You: It's gonna be a long night
Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Jun 6, 2012. 3338 views. ID = 5699

Onomatopoeia Poem: A Little Rain won't Hurt You

Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Jun 6, 2012. 3338 views. ID = 5699
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A roof over your head is not the same as a good roof over your head
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I'm hearing a Pling, and a plop, and a plunk
It drips from my ceiling and onto my bunk
My roof's full of holes and my bed is all wet
And so is the carpet, the couch and my pet
A flash of lighting and kaboom of the thunder
The flick of the lights makes my heart go a flutter
It's only a storm and I hope you don't mind
If I find me a towel and get out of this rhyme


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This post is part of a writing prompt: Onomatopoeia Poem

Comments


alilee
Jun 7, 2012
love this!!
   ~Posted by alilee, Jun 7, 2012

Douglas
Jun 8, 2012
I was beginning to wonder if you'd fallen off the face of the earth (or been drowned in a little rain) - you never wait till this late in the week to write!

Nice poem, by the way. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Jun 8, 2012

R. Wesley Lovil
Jun 8, 2012
I was out of town and when I borrowed a PC, I couldn't find the site because I couldn't remember the name (how embarrassing)
   ~Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Jun 8, 2012



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