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Free Write: How fast a life can change
Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Jul 24, 2011. 1820 views. ID = 4735

Free Write

Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Jul 24, 2011. 1820 views. ID = 4735
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Did he really see what happened?
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I was late to the party and as I hurried around the house to the den I passed by a window. What I saw through the window was devastating and I knew my life could never be the same. As my heart broke I watched my girl friend Beth kissing my best friend Ron. There could be nothing worse than losing you love to your friend.

How could these two betray me I thought that we would spend the rest of our lives together and I rushed inside to confront them both. As I entered I watched as they broke their kiss

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snapper
Jul 26, 2011
Wow I really liked this piece. It really me feel like I was there. Keep up the good writing.
   ~Posted by snapper, Jul 26, 2011



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