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Nw Lk What Yu've Dne!: Someone is always complaining about something these days...
Posted by Rabbit Stu, Feb 26, 2008. 3816 views. ID = 670

Nw Lk What Yu've Dne!

Posted by Rabbit Stu, Feb 26, 2008. 3816 views. ID = 670
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Stp hitting me! I mean it! That hurts when yu d that! Why can't yu just leave me alne?

I mean, I dn't hit yu d I? Nt a chance! I just sit here n the desk and mind my wn business and yu cme alng and beat n me, just fr the sake f getting smething psted n that dumb Fifteen Minutes f Fictin writing prmpt!

I hpe yu feel guilty fr this, yu big fat jerk! It lks like ne f my vwel keys is brken nw!

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Feb 28, 2008
Wow, that is hilarious! My niece is cracking up. It took her a minute, but she got it. I like how you kept the O's out. :)
   ~Posted by Hannah, Feb 28, 2008

Rabbit Stu
Feb 28, 2008
It actually took several read-throughs to get rid of all the O's - it's amazing how your eyes just scan right over letters without noticing them. (Never mind the fact that I decided at the very beginning that I was going to leave out the O's, and I STILL typed some!)

I should have just typed it normally, and then done a search-and-replace! But, it wrked ut anyway. :D
   ~Posted by Rabbit Stu, Feb 28, 2008

Josiah T.
Feb 28, 2008
   ~Posted by Josiah T., Feb 28, 2008

Mar 6, 2008
Very interesting =)

Did you mean to add in a couple slip-ups such as a missing "i" and "d" in "ddn't" ?

   ~Posted by Angela, Mar 6, 2008

Rabbit Stu
Mar 6, 2008
Nope! That's "don't", not "didn't". :)
   ~Posted by Rabbit Stu, Mar 6, 2008

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