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Round And Round I Spin: A poem about someone going around in circles, never able to stop
Posted by Rabbit Stu, Oct 5, 2007. 1260 views. ID = 98

Round And Round I Spin

Posted by Rabbit Stu, Oct 5, 2007. 1260 views. ID = 98
This post was written in 16 minutes.
Yes, this is quite silly. I hope you weren't expecting any different!
This post has been awarded 12 stars by 4 readers.

Faster and faster I race and run,
I don't know when I shall stop.
Round and round I circle and spin,
Until I'm sure that I must drop.

When can I stop this foolish running?
My legs are starting to ache.
Don't you know I've done my best?
Please, won't you let me take a break?

Each night I turn my gaze to heaven,
And I wish upon my favorite star -
That one day soon it would be a crime
To own a gerbil powered car.


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This post has been awarded 12 stars by 4 readers.

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death_shadow
Oct 11, 2007
I like it.
   ~Posted by death_shadow, Oct 11, 2007



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