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The following is a piece of writing submitted by peekaboo28 on October 7, 2011
"i wish you could understand how i feel.."

the fallout.

words can't even begin to depict the hurt i feel
i trusted you
i put everything i had into you and you threw it away
you stepped all over me and do you even care?
do you even notice what pain im in?
i hope you have a great time with her
i hope she doesn't step on your laces and you fall
i hope you don't spill punch all over her dress
i hope you have the time of your life
the worst part is is that i love you
i love you with every fiber from my soul
you exhale the air i intake to keep me going
you know me
you understood me
but now you're gone.

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