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The Diary of Jean part II
Posted by Mathax, Mar 3. 122 views. ID = 734
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This has been a profitable day. I just raided a English village. I am disappointed. The villagers did not put up much resistance. We came out of it with a lot of goods and gold. I have bought myself good armor and weapons off this raid. The English are not very happy with me. They have not been able to catch me and I do not engage them if I know that I cannot win. If there were two or three other bands like mine than the English would have a very hard time trying to survive, since I have been taking there crops.
I wish...
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Josiah T.
Mar 3 | *raises an eyebrow* WHAT do you wish? *lets down the eyebrow and raises the other one*
~Posted by Josiah T., Mar 3 | 
WOW
Mar 3 | Could I suggest that before you submit something you take time to read it aloud? I think then you would catch things like "a English village" and "than the English...". Watch out for "there, their, and they're".
~Posted by WOW, Mar 3 | 
Kenzie Fell Down
Mar 4 | Hmm...
~Posted by Kenzie Fell Down, Mar 4 |
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