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The Diary of Jean part II: This is from the Hundred Years of war.
Posted by Mathax, Mar 3, 2008. 1135 views. ID = 734

The Diary of Jean part II

Posted by Mathax, Mar 3, 2008. 1135 views. ID = 734
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This has been a profitable day. I just raided a English village. I am disappointed. The villagers did not put up much resistance. We came out of it with a lot of goods and gold. I have bought myself good armor and weapons off this raid. The English are not very happy with me. They have not been able to catch me and I do not engage them if I know that I cannot win. If there were two or three other bands like mine than the English would have a very hard time trying to survive, since I have been taking there crops.

I wish...

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This post has been awarded 6 stars by 2 readers.
This post is Part 2 of a writing series titled The Diary of Jean.

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Josiah T.
Mar 3, 2008
*raises an eyebrow* WHAT do you wish? *lets down the eyebrow and raises the other one*
   ~Posted by Josiah T., Mar 3, 2008

WOW
Mar 3, 2008
Could I suggest that before you submit something you take time to read it aloud? I think then you would catch things like "a English village" and "than the English...". Watch out for "there, their, and they're".
   ~Posted by WOW, Mar 3, 2008

Kenzie Fell Down
Mar 4, 2008
Hmm...
   ~Posted by Kenzie Fell Down, Mar 4, 2008



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