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Rainy Day
Posted by Sylvan Sylph, Aug 3, 2008. 802 views. ID = 1540
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Raindrops
Falling
Unsteady rhythm
Minute drumbeats
Playing on the roof
Rolling down the window panes
Patter
Splatter
Puddles filling
Over spilling
Truncated rings spread
With every new-fallen bead
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Comments
Scribbler
Aug 4, 2008 | Your rhythm and choice of words create a wonderful description of the sights and sounds of a rainy day.
I liked this very much.
~Posted by Scribbler, Aug 4, 2008 | 
Douglas
Aug 4, 2008 | Nice poem! I puzzled over the word "truncated", because the definition of truncated I was thinking of had to do with having an end cut off (like a truncated cone, in geometry) I had to look it up to remember it can also mean "cut short in duration," which, I assume is the definition you're using. Anyway, very nice!
~Posted by Douglas, Aug 4, 2008 |
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