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To Remain Untitled: The loss of what matters least, therefore the most.
Posted by Jessablue, Feb 14, 2009. 1754 views. ID = 2337

To Remain Untitled

Posted by Jessablue, Feb 14, 2009. 1754 views. ID = 2337
This post was written in 3 minutes.
A lot of ditched feelings came back for this one.
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Remember Sea
Waves
Enticing me
Leaving you
Sailing
For once in your life.
You sailed
You really sailed
For once in your life
You had direction
Then I said then
I said
Slow down
Your wave was too high
You were high
I was too low
Too low to care.
And you
You
You
Crashed and drowned
Too hot to burn
I know its wrong
But I don't care.

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