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Broken: Don't judge.
Posted by KC Rell, Mar 12, 2009. 1840 views. ID = 2453

Broken

Posted by KC Rell, Mar 12, 2009. 1840 views. ID = 2453
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This was inspired by a lot of songs. And because this is mostly me, partly not, and some people. And not the people that just like to get attention, the *real* people who feel this way.
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Don’t make me cry, I can’t take anymore.
Don’t make fun of me; I’m nothing to laugh at.
Turn away, I don't need you.
I’m broken, but I can deal.

Don’t talk behind my back, I’m sick of it.
Don’t think you’re better than me; I’m too used to it.
Just turn away, I don’t need you.
I’m broken, but I'm real.

Don’t mistake me for being selfish, I’m not.
Don’t say I’m mad at the world, I’m not.
Don’t say I hate everyone, I don’t.
I’m broken, but I can still feel.


You always say I don’t love anyone—I do.
You’re always putting me down—don’t.
I may be broken, but I can heal.

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Comments


Hannah
Mar 12, 2009
Wow, Kubby. Definitely one of your best. Wow. I like the last lines of each verse, how they're the same but different. :D Really good!
   ~Posted by Hannah, Mar 12, 2009

KC Rell
Mar 14, 2009
Thanks :D
   ~Posted by KC Rell, Mar 14, 2009



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