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Confession

Posted by Katie, Jul 29. 562 views. ID = 1526
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I’m honestly not quite sure how to say this. I really don’t want to hurt you, but I feel like I’m not being fair to you. You’ve expressed an interest in me and I feel like you should know that I’ve given this a lot of thought, but I just don’t feel the same way about you.

I really feel terrible about this. You’ve always been there for me when I needed you, and we’ve spent so much time together over the years. You’ve been with me since I was two, all through my school years, and most recently, you helped me through the college classes I needed to earn my degree. You’d think that after all these years and all that you’ve done for me, my feelings for you would have changed. But no, I still feel nothing for you. Our relationship can’t even really be called a friendship. We’re more like… acquaintances. I know how much you’d like to be my friend, really I do. And yes, all of my other friends have encouraged me to get closer to you. They all love you. They think we would be great together. My father especially thinks we would do well together. He’s always liked you, but in my defense, he’s spent more time with you than I have. I realize all this, and yet, I just can’t change the way I feel about you.

Please don’t take this too hard. There are so many others out there who absolutely adore you. You’d be much better off with them. They love you like I never could. They aren’t satisfied unless they spend the majority of their day with you. Now that’s devotion. I could never spend that much time with you. Indeed, I try avidly to avoid you, though considering I work so closely with you, I very rarely succeed. I’m sorry to be so harsh, but I feel the truth must come out. Believe me when I say that it is with deepest regrets that I tell you that I can never love you, Mathematics.


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Comments


Josiah T.
Jul 29
LOL!! When my dad sees this... ;-)
   ~Posted by Josiah T., Jul 29


Mathax
Jul 29
The somebody who isn't satisfied unless they spend the majority of their day with you. Is probably me! :)
   ~Posted by Mathax, Jul 29


Katie
Jul 29
Haha, yeah, don't I know it...
;-)

I should mention that my father has spent more time with math than I have because he's an electrician, and also, I work with math closely because I'm a cashier.
   ~Posted by Katie, Jul 29


Katie
Jul 29
And you're right 'thiax, I was thinking of you and your dad when I wrote that. :-)
   ~Posted by Katie, Jul 29


Laura
Jul 30
I heartily agree!
   ~Posted by Laura, Jul 30


Hannah
Jul 31
Lol! That's me!
   ~Posted by Hannah, Jul 31


overmortal
Aug 2
Zzzzzzzing!
   ~Posted by overmortal, Aug 2


clayman
Aug 7
Hey, don't knock pi until you've had some, and love triangles can be fun, too...
   ~Posted by clayman, Aug 7


Kylee
Sep 13
This is just plain hilarious... x]
   ~Posted by Kylee, Sep 13




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