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In a World: Things I'm thankful for in a world that has gone mad
Posted by Janee, Nov 20, 2007. 2521 views. ID = 332

In a World

Posted by Janee, Nov 20, 2007. 2521 views. ID = 332
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A tall straight tree and a breath of fresh air
in a world filled with smog

A touch of compassion and a moment of peace
in a world torn by war

A word spoken truly, a heart with no deceit
in a world proud of lies


A husband and wife bound together with love
in a world devoid of fidelity

Eyes that shine with understanding and good sense
in a world that has gone mad

A table topped with fine food,
surrounded with true friendship,
in a world that is starved for both.


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Mathax
Nov 20, 2007
Powerful.
A table topped with fine food,
surrounded with true friendship,
in a world that is starved for both.
Very true. like a lamp on a hill in a dark place.

   ~Posted by Mathax, Nov 20, 2007



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