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If I Could: Poem
Posted by wordsmith, Apr 4, 2012. 3491 views. ID = 5519

If I Could

Posted by wordsmith, Apr 4, 2012. 3491 views. ID = 5519
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Since I agree that "To fly among the 'coulds' up high" seemed like an interesting first line.
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To fly among the "coulds" up high
"If I could I would" says I
But since you can't you never will
"But if I could I would" says still
But just because you could and would
it doesn't always mean you should
"But since I can't we'll never see
how all those 'if I coulds' would be"

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Comments


alilee
Apr 4, 2012
I really like the play on words and it flows really well.
   ~Posted by alilee, Apr 4, 2012

Douglas
Apr 4, 2012
Bravo! I was actually thinking that maybe I would do this, but you beat me to it!
   ~Posted by Douglas, Apr 4, 2012



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