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Climbing Archer's Seat: climbing a small mountain
Posted by wordsmith, May 30, 2009. 1278 views. ID = 2639

Climbing Archer's Seat

Posted by wordsmith, May 30, 2009. 1278 views. ID = 2639
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Inspired by our feild trip to climb a mountain in Edinburgh. It used to be called Archer's seat but they've rename it a few times and I can't remember what it's called now. It's fairly small but I still couldn't make it all the way, just 3/4. I guess I'm not as in shape as I thought I was. Going down was much easier.
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To hike up a tall mountain
the writers make it sound so fun
with views that are well worth it
and a lovely setting sun

But hiking up a mountain
even one that's small
ain't worth it when your feet hurt
and you're not in shape at all

They say the veiw is worth it
but you have to be able to see
wich is something I'm not good at
when I'm blind and all sweaty




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Peter-Twitchell
Dec 17, 2009
i see something all the time
   ~Posted by Peter-Twitchell, Dec 17, 2009



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