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As I Was Walking in the Park One Day: nature is good
Posted by wordsmith, Jun 2, 2009. 4011 views. ID = 2646

As I Was Walking in the Park One Day

Posted by wordsmith, Jun 2, 2009. 4011 views. ID = 2646
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Inspired by the pheasant I saw in Dalkieth park while lost in the woods today.
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As I was walking in the park today
I spied a pheasant by the way
I wondered at his pretty head
his coloring of rust and red
then fancied he'd look better dead
and served up with a slice of bread

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Comments


Jessablue
Feb 9, 2010
that second line seems kind of off, are you trying to say you saw the pheasant by the way as in along the walk,using the word "way" to refer to the path you took? Or as in "by the way, I saw the pheasant." ?

I really like this though, I love poems with comedic twists at the end.
   ~Posted by Jessablue, Feb 9, 2010

wordsmith
Feb 11, 2010
Way was meant to refer to the path. I saw the pheasant on the side of the path.
   ~Posted by wordsmith, Feb 11, 2010



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