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To Whom It May Concern: A little girl asks to take back a defective toy....
Posted by Hannah, Mar 11. 138 views. ID = 818
 
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To Whom It May Concern

Posted by Hannah, Mar 11. 138 views. ID = 818
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Too hoom it may konsern,

i was just wondiryng if i culd take somthing that my mommy and daddy bout. they told me it was four me, but i dont like it. i kep teling them, and ascing them were they got it so i kan take it back, but they just laf at me!

i wood like a nother one. they are vary cuut, but this one seems detective. its a noying. its vary loud and keeps me up all nite. it doesnt even have to come to skool with me. i cant pik it up and huld it and play with it, no one will let me. they tell me that it is two frajel. wat ever that meens. everyone is starring and gigling at the new toy like its somthing spesal, well its not. it cant even talk!

my parents sad that this new toy wood be fun to play with in a capple of manths, but its not fun now. So, too hoom it may konsern, culd you pleese send me a new little bruther?

Thanks!
-Sadie

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Josiah T.
Mar 11
hehe. :-) I'd give you some of mine... :-P
   ~Posted by Josiah T., Mar 11


Sylavash
Mar 11
cuut!
   ~Posted by Sylavash, Mar 11


Sylvan Sylph
Mar 11
Cute. I'm so glad I'm the youngest in my family. :D
   ~Posted by Sylvan Sylph, Mar 11


Kenzie Fell Down
Mar 11
Nice.
   ~Posted by Kenzie Fell Down, Mar 11


Hannah
Mar 12
Thank you.
   ~Posted by Hannah, Mar 12




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