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Notes from the Underground: Who am I?
Posted by Hannah, Jul 28. 84 views. ID = 1521
 
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Notes from the Underground

Posted by Hannah, Jul 28. 84 views. ID = 1521
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I am one among many
I am alone
I am me

Do you see me?
Do you even know I'm here?
Do you love me?

I know I've been mean
I know I haven't been forgiving
I know who I am

But do you know
But do you see
But do you love me?

I don't hate you
I don't forgive you
I don't see you

You have hurt me
You have killed me
You have torn me

You haven't broken me
You haven't won
You haven't left

I'll wait for you
I'll wait to forgive
I'll wait to forget

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Is this a song.
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