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Fourteen
Posted by Hannah, Feb 21. 81 views. ID = 632
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 | I started writing this thinking I was going to be doing something completely different. I haven't done many poems, so this is only my fourth or fifth. I don't even know what kind of poem it is, if it is a poem.:) |  | This post has been awarded 13 stars by 3 readers. |
Laughter
All around
Overwhelmed
Alone
Bibs
Sweaters
Onesies
Diapers
Blue balloons
Shifting
Through the air
Chatter
Blankets
Bottles
Clothes
Toys
Pink face
Can't believe
They're talking
Of these things
Cameras
Pens
Paper
Cake
I shouldn't be
Doing this
Too young
Should've stayed away
Cribs
Pillows
Rugs
Rooms
Fourteen
Is too soon
Marriage talk
No
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Comments
Mathax
Feb 21 | Yes, fourteen is to soon for marriage talk.
~Posted by Mathax, Feb 21 |
Hannah
Feb 21 | It's not just marriage. Marriage is just the simple answer to most older people for single girls who get pregnant. She's too young to be pregnant, I don't know if you got that. :)
~Posted by Hannah, Feb 21 |
Mathax
Feb 22 | I am not really sure what you mean.
~Posted by Mathax, Feb 22 |
Mathax
Feb 22 | Wait, I think I do now, You have a very interesting way of putting it.
~Posted by Mathax, Feb 22 |
Hannah
Feb 23 | Thanks.
~Posted by Hannah, Feb 23 |
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