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Evan: Secret Love
Posted by Hannah, Feb 22, 2008. 1889 views. ID = 634

Evan

Posted by Hannah, Feb 22, 2008. 1889 views. ID = 634
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I wrote this at 2:50 A.M. Yeah, I couldn't sleep. :) I originally wrote it as just a short story or a kind of entry but turned it into a poem. I like it better as a poem. :)
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He says my name quietly, slowly, as though he chewed it in his mouth before it came out. I laugh, long and hard. I hope he doesn't see that I'm screaming inside. My heart is beating like a drum. Boom. Bang. Boom. Boom. Oh, I hope he doesn't hear it.

His eyes look at me. Those deep green eyes. Those eyes that have seen worlds and yet have never left his hometown. His eyes pull me into him. He must think I'm crazy. I keep pausing and not talking back to him when he asks me a question or tells me something that needs an answer. I can't help it. He has beautiful eyes.

He's talking. He's talking of the girl. I hate her. I've never seen her but I'll bet she's beautiful. She probably has long, blonde hair that always looks perfect. My stringy, short, dirty-blonde hair is not his type. He would never look at me that way. I'm his best friend, he says. He has no idea that he's the reason I cry myself to sleep. Just thinking of him and how we'll never be.


I can't think when he's around. All I can think about is the way his hand grabs on excitedly to mine as he tells me of kissing his girl. All I can think about is the feel of his hand on mine. All I can hear is my heart beating. Boom. Bang. Boom. Boom.

I love you Evan. And you'll never know.



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Comments


Mathax
Feb 22, 2008
*raises the old eyebrow*
   ~Posted by Mathax, Feb 22, 2008

Hannah
Feb 22, 2008
What does that mean? :)
   ~Posted by Hannah, Feb 22, 2008

Mathax
Feb 23, 2008
I forgot. We have had a very interesting conversation about this on one of Doug's other sites.
   ~Posted by Mathax, Feb 23, 2008

Hannah
Feb 24, 2008
KooKoo.
   ~Posted by Hannah, Feb 24, 2008

Douglas
Feb 25, 2008
Hi Hannah - whenever someone posts comments on your writing that either make no sense at all, or have nothing to do with what you've written you should feel free to delete their comments. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Feb 25, 2008

Douglas
Feb 25, 2008
I like this quite well as a poem also.
   ~Posted by Douglas, Feb 25, 2008

Hannah
Feb 25, 2008
Thank you.
   ~Posted by Hannah, Feb 25, 2008

KC Rell
Aug 22, 2008
Cute :3
   ~Posted by KC Rell, Aug 22, 2008



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