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Blossom, Bubbles and Buttercup: My sister's crazy dog-like birds were bugging me! :D
Posted by Hannah, Jul 28, 2008. 1607 views. ID = 1524

Blossom, Bubbles and Buttercup

Posted by Hannah, Jul 28, 2008. 1607 views. ID = 1524
This post was written in 2 minutes.
I was incredibly bored looking at our three parakeets as I wrote this poem. I do actually hate them. This is my first real try at a rhyming poem, so it's pretty bad. :D
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Your noises are annoying,
you keep me up at night,
I really just can't stand you,
and your ungainly sight.

I wonder what would happen
oh, my dear old friends,
if I could leave you
and your stupid trends.

One of you is blue,
the other one is white,
the last one is pure yellow,
and what a terrible sight!


I wish I could let you free;
you'd probably be much happier,
if you could only take wing
and find some place more sappier.

But, alas, that I cannot do,
for although I do despise you
for the mess you make,
my sister would just go find you!


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Comments


Kalie-j
Jul 30, 2008
I love this it is so much like my sister and I she had three parakeets and now she has two love birds and they where and are annoying
   ~Posted by Kalie-j, Jul 30, 2008

KC Rell
Aug 17, 2008
Ok I have to admit they are kind of annoying.. I like the poem, too.
   ~Posted by KC Rell, Aug 17, 2008



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