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Lectures!: No teen can deny that that same old lecture irritates them to the bone...
Posted by gabemay, Mar 4, 2010. 271 views. ID = 3263
 
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Lectures!

Posted by gabemay, Mar 4, 2010. 271 views. ID = 3263
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Your tone so piercing
Ever appearing
In my haunted
Ghoulsih dreaming

It penetrates
Claws at my skin
And causes hate
With an evil grin

Like a sharp nail
It drives it home
Yes, you prevail
So I won't roam

You could have said
Please and thank-you
You chose instead
And your tone grew

And now in gloom
Do I obligue
To clean my room
Without a cry





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