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Misspoken: Ever had this happen?
Posted by Laura, May 25, 2008. 375 views. ID = 1334
 
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Misspoken

Posted by Laura, May 25, 2008. 375 views. ID = 1334
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There was a hindrance
When my words were spoken;
The brilliant comeback,
The purposeful token,
Developed inside,
Seems to have sounded
Far more mature,
Witty, and grounded;
Before leaving my mouth,
With much less allure
Than my mind had planned -
I can see you do not understand.

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Mathax
May 25, 2008
Yes
   ~Posted by Mathax, May 25, 2008


Josiah T.
May 25, 2008
lol, yup
   ~Posted by Josiah T., May 25, 2008






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