Fifteen Minutes Of Fiction Writing Gallery

Mis-cast: Just a little something that came out
Posted by Laura, Apr 12, 2008. 1027 views. ID = 1116

Mis-cast

Posted by Laura, Apr 12, 2008. 1027 views. ID = 1116
This post was written in 6 minutes.
This post has been awarded 15 stars by 4 readers.

I fear to have overdrawn you, and your words;
Seen in you lights that merely flickered,
Eyes that danced when times were pretty,
And a heart that lingered long enough to read me.

No doubt, you certainly could be so equipped,
Yet lacking luster for my petty script,
I cannot blame; I had not known,
To save the script but leave the cast alone.

Copyright 2008 Laura. All rights reserved. FifteenMinutesOfFiction.com has been granted non-exclusive rights to display this work. For permission to reprint this item, please contact the author.
 


   
You must be logged in to comment on or rate this writing.

Click here to join the Fifteen Minutes Of Fiction Writing Community!

This post has been awarded 15 stars by 4 readers.

Comments


Douglas
Apr 23, 2008
I'm probably just being dense, but I don't get this one...any words of explanation?
   ~Posted by Douglas, Apr 23, 2008

Laura
Apr 24, 2008
I guess to explain this I would say that by "script" I'm just kinda referring to life, while "cast" is the people in it. Basically what I was trying to get across is the notion of trying to "cast" our own lives, and make people out to be more than they really are.
   ~Posted by Laura, Apr 24, 2008



Search for Great Fiction

Use the google search bar below to find writings exclusively on this site.

Custom Search



News!    Writing Prompt    My Assignment    FAQ    Contact    Privacy Policy    Search     Terms of Use     Login