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Sunset Clouds: Sunset clouds compared to lava flows in an iambic pentameter quatrain
Posted by Douglas, Aug 28, 2010. 2150 views. ID = 3795

Sunset Clouds

Posted by Douglas, Aug 28, 2010. 2150 views. ID = 3795
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This one comes from my sunset hike up Singepole Mountain yesterday.
This post has been awarded 18 stars by 5 readers.
This post is Part 31 of a writing series titled Stories and Poems About Mountains.

The sunset clouds, like fiery lava flows,
Pour silently across the the rosy sky,
Ignite the granite peaks as darkness grows,
And sear their scorching beauty on my eye.

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This post has been awarded 18 stars by 5 readers.
This post is Part 31 of a writing series titled Stories and Poems About Mountains. The next part of this series can be found here: God's Sunset Show.

Comments


gabemay
Sep 2, 2010
the poetic nature of this poem is quite rerefreshing at relaxing, also great imagery and syntax, love the way you included the fact you were observing it all at the END of the poem. three thumbs up...if your a three handed monster...lol
   ~Posted by gabemay, Sep 2, 2010



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