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The Breath of Summer
Posted by Douglas, Mar 4, 2009. 1227 views. ID = 2408
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 | For those who are sick of winter, here's something to tantalize you. Written with slant rhymes. |  | This post has been awarded 32 stars by 8 readers. |
The breath of summer falls upon my cheek
And warmly kisses moisture from my lips
While dandelion paratroopers sweep
With graceful ease across the grassy slopes.
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Comments
Sylvan Sylph
Mar 4, 2009 | Nice, very poignant. It feels like I'm there. Though I'm not sure if it making me imagine the summer allows me to more easily bear the remainder of winter or makes me more impatient for the snow and cold to be gone.
~Posted by Sylvan Sylph, Mar 4, 2009 | 
Brett G. Rudder
Mar 4, 2009 | Nice wording.
And yeah, I thought of it myself...lately as I've been writing I prefer to think of unorthodox rhyming schemes.
~Posted by Brett G. Rudder, Mar 4, 2009 |
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