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My Love Is Like a Churning Ocean Deep
Posted by Douglas, Nov 11, 2009. 192 views. ID = 2952
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 | Iambic pentameter, ABAB quatrain followed by a couplet. |  | This post has been awarded 23 stars by 5 readers. |  | This post is Part 11 of a writing series titled Love Poems. |
My love is like a churning ocean deep,
A raging, roiling, river vast and wide,
And I would climb a mountain tall and steep,
Would climb with unrelenting, stubborn stride,
To simply find myself all warm and snug
With you, my love, within my coffee mug.
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| This post has been awarded 23 stars by 5 readers. | | This post is Part 11 of a writing series titled Love Poems. |
Comments
WOW
Nov 11, 2009 | Having trouble getting going this morning?
~Posted by WOW, Nov 11, 2009 |
Douglas
Nov 11, 2009 | No, more the opposite...I got going too early. :P
~Posted by Douglas, Nov 11, 2009 | 
'Chelle
Nov 19, 2009 | haha! A lovely surprise ending! love it
~Posted by 'Chelle, Nov 19, 2009 |
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