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My Love Is Like a Churning Ocean Deep: What do you expect at 5:30 in the morning?
Posted by Douglas, Nov 11, 2009. 1696 views. ID = 2952

My Love Is Like a Churning Ocean Deep

Posted by Douglas, Nov 11, 2009. 1696 views. ID = 2952
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Iambic pentameter, ABAB quatrain followed by a couplet.
This post has been awarded 23 stars by 5 readers.
This post is Part 11 of a writing series titled Love Poems.

My love is like a churning ocean deep,
A raging, roiling, river vast and wide,
And I would climb a mountain tall and steep,
Would climb with unrelenting, stubborn stride,
To simply find myself all warm and snug
With you, my love, within my coffee mug.

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This post has been awarded 23 stars by 5 readers.
This post is Part 11 of a writing series titled Love Poems.

Comments


WOW
Nov 11, 2009
Having trouble getting going this morning?
   ~Posted by WOW, Nov 11, 2009

Douglas
Nov 11, 2009
No, more the opposite...I got going too early. :P
   ~Posted by Douglas, Nov 11, 2009

'Chelle
Nov 19, 2009
haha! A lovely surprise ending! love it
   ~Posted by 'Chelle, Nov 19, 2009



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