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Determined Love (Love Sonnet IV): Very similar to Love Sonnet III, but with a different ending.
Posted by Douglas, Sep 16, 2008. 2454 views. ID = 1733

Determined Love (Love Sonnet IV)

Posted by Douglas, Sep 16, 2008. 2454 views. ID = 1733
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This is almost identical to Love Sonnet III (Eternal Love). I removed the names, and changed the concluding couplet.

The new couplet gives a vastly different meaning to the poem.
This post has been awarded 18 stars by 4 readers.
This post is Part 4 of a writing series titled Love Poems.

My darling love and trusted faithful friend,
Beloved sweetheart, apple of my eye,
Our love, it is eternal, without end,
It shall not fail, not even when we die.
My love for you shall follow to the grave,
And to the life that waits beyond this earth;
This love is true, determined, faithful, brave,
Transcending our demise and new rebirth.
And in some bright, eternal, golden plane,
Where faithful spirits pass through pearly gates,
Our hearts, entwined, will surely meet again,
Ordained forever by the blessed fates.
Our love shall not be stopped by death's cruel border,
So what's the point of this restraining order?

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This post has been awarded 18 stars by 4 readers.
This post is Part 4 of a writing series titled Love Poems. The next part of this series can be found here: Roses Are Red, Violets Are Blue.
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