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I Cannot See the Mountains: A lover seperated from is love, cannot see through the mountains that divide them--even when the mounatins are not "there"
Posted by Brett G. Rudder, May 28, 2009. 583 views. ID = 2630
 
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I Cannot See the Mountains

Posted by Brett G. Rudder, May 28, 2009. 583 views. ID = 2630
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Let me know if you can grasp the description from the poem at all, or if it's just pretty rhyming words to you.

Although, what does it mean to YOU?
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I cannot see the mountains
They are covered by the fog

And though I cannot see the mountains
I can neither see beyond

What lies behind those mountains?
What, may I never see?

For though I cannot see the mountains
I still cannot see thee

--Brett G. Rudder

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