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Love, or lack thereof.: A sad poem about love.
Posted by Angela, Oct 8, 2007. 1795 views. ID = 133

Love, or lack thereof.

Posted by Angela, Oct 8, 2007. 1795 views. ID = 133
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Author is having a bad case of the Mondays made worse because her love of two years has recently decided that he wants her no longer.
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Some people believe in love.
They say it's like you're flying.
They say, "Once you feel it,
"You'll know I'm not lying."

Well, that's good for them,
Yes, it may be grand and all.
But whatever happens to you
When they leave and you fall?

What happens when wings don't work?
When you no longer fly?
When you suddenly find yourself
Plummeting from the sky?


Maybe it was an accident,
Then again, maybe not.
They may leave you broken,
On the ground to rot.

Or maybe they'll be kinder,
If you've been with them for years.
Let you wonder by yourself,
As you slowly drown in tears.

Some people believe in love.
They say it's like you're flying.
Well, I personally say to them,
When it's gone, it feels like dying.

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Comments


Hope Sinks
Oct 9, 2007
that's sad. =/ sorry to hear it. I like your last verse the best.
   ~Posted by Hope Sinks, Oct 9, 2007

Angela
Oct 9, 2007
Thanks ^^. The last verse was originally suppose to be the first one but I thought I'd make a big finish.

You have an interesting pen name. I might as well make mine "Love sucks".
   ~Posted by Angela, Oct 9, 2007

Josiah T.
Oct 11, 2007
Yow. I had a similar experience with my best friend recently.
   ~Posted by Josiah T., Oct 11, 2007

death_shadow
Oct 12, 2007
huummm!!! a little to sad but pritty good.
   ~Posted by death_shadow, Oct 12, 2007

Angela
Oct 13, 2007
>.< Yeah. It's not a good season for love.
   ~Posted by Angela, Oct 13, 2007



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