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Clothes vs Fur
Posted by Angela, Oct 23, 2007. 136 views. ID = 206
This post was written in 4 minutes.
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 | Author didn't really do a very good job xD Not much imagery here. She's about to go to a pre-surgery appointment in aboot (sic)... another 5 minutes ^^
Uh... it's clothes vs fur... |  | This post has been awarded 9 stars by 3 readers. |
Simple or stylish
Fabric sewn together, Clothes
Made for the furless
Fur, soft and fuzzy
Found on bunnies and puppies
Makes them all cuddly
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| This post has been awarded 9 stars by 3 readers. |  | This post is part of a writing prompt: Man-Made vs Nature |
Comments
Josiah T.
Oct 23, 2007 | Good luck with the surgery!
~Posted by Josiah T., Oct 23, 2007 | 
Douglas
Oct 24, 2007 | I thought it was interesting in your second haiku how you had all those ee sounds at the ends of the words...wondered if you did it on purpose, or if it just happened? either way, it sounds good.
~Posted by Douglas, Oct 24, 2007 |
Angela
Oct 24, 2007 | @ Doug - Yes, it was on purpose... though... maybe I'm laying it on a little too thick.
@ Josh - Thanks ^^ A lot of people have been saying that to me... though... it's not like I'll be doing anything xD I'll be knocked out.
~Posted by Angela, Oct 24, 2007 |
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