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Spooky: Fear
Posted by alilee, Oct 28, 2014. 669 views. ID = 6803

Spooky

Posted by alilee, Oct 28, 2014. 669 views. ID = 6803
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This post has been awarded 26 stars by 6 readers.

A swirling,curling,furling mist of white
as evening gloom descends to dead of night
an eerie hoot of owl from a great height
A feeling that this place is not quite right
an unease that could quickly turn to fright
and no-one near to hear me in my plight
my heart is racing and my chest feels tight
amidst the murk,the trees of towering might


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This post has been awarded 26 stars by 6 readers.
This post is part of a writing prompt: Spooky

Comments


writingale
Oct 29, 2014
Brilliant! In a few lines you managed to convey a looming, threatening danger. Gave me shivers! *Five stars* :)
   ~Posted by writingale, Oct 29, 2014

alilee
Oct 30, 2014
Thank you so much for your comments!
   ~Posted by alilee, Oct 30, 2014

Leola
Nov 9, 2014
You made me feel spooked. Great!
   ~Posted by Leola, Nov 9, 2014



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