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Arrival of Fall: fall anounces itself with wind and rain
Posted by du courage, Oct 5, 2014. 804 views. ID = 6766

Arrival of Fall

Posted by du courage, Oct 5, 2014. 804 views. ID = 6766
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Fall is the wind letting leafs dance in the air, and the constant poc poc of falling chestnuts and acorns. After today's walk a second version popped up in my mind. I wonder which one you like best.
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First version of my fall poem:

The day is gray
the sun on strike
The wind tosses leafs
and birds alike

Chestnuts are falling
mind your head
but with an umbrella
fall isn't so bad

Second version of my fall poem:

The sound of leafs
turns to brittle and dry
in gusts of wind
like birds they fly


A knock on the window
Who's making that sound?
An acorn or chestnut
on it's way to the ground

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