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Twilight stroll: perception of a day going to sleep
Posted by du courage, Jul 23, 2014. 886 views. ID = 6702

Twilight stroll

Posted by du courage, Jul 23, 2014. 886 views. ID = 6702
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We were late with our evening stroll today. This poem was the result
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The day goes silent
and merges
slowly
with the night

The trees turn grey
and whisper
a last bird's call
sounds clear and bright

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Comments


Douglas
Jul 24, 2014
Have you ever thought about compiling and publishing a book of poems? I really love the succinctness with which you express ideas and images. I think there are a lot of people who would really appreciate it - if you could get it published and marketed.
   ~Posted by Douglas, Jul 24, 2014

alilee
Jul 25, 2014
I agree with Douglas' comment. I love your clarity and ability to express your ideas in a few words portraying a word picture like an artist with a few brushstrokes.
   ~Posted by alilee, Jul 25, 2014

du courage
Jul 25, 2014
Luckily you two can't see me blushing ;-) Thanks for your nice comments. And yes, I don't know how it's going to take form, but perhaps I'll find a way of sharing my poems, other than posting them om Fifteen minutes of Fiction (which cradle of poems and prose never can be praised enough!) Feasible ideas are always welcome of course.
   ~Posted by du courage, Jul 25, 2014



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