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The inner voice: Would I miss talking to myself
Posted by du courage, Jul 3, 2014. 872 views. ID = 6687

The inner voice

Posted by du courage, Jul 3, 2014. 872 views. ID = 6687
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Sometimes I can really get irritated with the voice in my head, which seems unable to stop, especially at night. But what if it wouldn't be there. Wouldn't I miss it terribly?
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Would I be lonely
without my internal voice
It sometimes is helpful
but most times just noise

It merely says things
it told me before
and when asked to be silent
it talks even more

Would I be lonely
am I able to bear
if my inner discussions
are no longer there

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Douglas
Jul 4, 2014
Sometimes the inner voice gets going at 90 mph within minutes of me going to bed at night. Not conducive to sleep!
   ~Posted by Douglas, Jul 4, 2014



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