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Set for Life: we need money to get by but---
Posted by alilee, May 4, 2014. 1232 views. ID = 6645

Set for Life

Posted by alilee, May 4, 2014. 1232 views. ID = 6645
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With this statement I agree
The best things in my life are free
hugs and kisses, laughter and love
friends and family, sunshine above
luxurious living is not for me
the best things in my life are free

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Comments


du courage
May 10, 2014
Nice poem and I totally agree with you.
I hope you won't mind my commenting on your poem, but reading it, I just thought the rhythm would flow more with just a few alterations:
Second line: The best things in my life are for free
Fifth line: luxurious living is nothing for me
Last line: the best things in my life will always be free
It's just a suggestion, but of course the poem is already a fine one as it is.
   ~Posted by du courage, May 10, 2014

alilee
May 10, 2014
Many thanks for your helpful comment
   ~Posted by alilee, May 10, 2014



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