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Saviours: This reflects the true power within all people.
Posted by Claire, Feb 13, 2008. 1428 views. ID = 590

Saviours

Posted by Claire, Feb 13, 2008. 1428 views. ID = 590
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If you think that you've seen this poem before on another author's site, don't worry, I haven't stolen it. *smiles*
I was that author, but I forgot my password and because there's no way of finding it out again, I made a new account.
Anyway, I would be honoured if you would take some time to read, rate and comment my poem. Thank you.
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I know of no evil, I see no sins.
Yet I am bound to this place like a sin itself.
With only a flicker of hope to guide my way.

Grasping at the threads of a thousand dreams.
Skipping through my very mind,
and never have i felt so close to religion.

But God is not the hand that guides me,
no, 'tis my mind's own wandering eye.
It leads me through the roaring fires, to safety on high.

I breathe deep, inhaling the new dimension.
For I am free at last and never shall be held.
I'll battle my way, forever more.

No man shall ever know the feeling until it comes to them.
And when it does, have mercy.
For they are the saviours of our dying world.


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Douglas
Feb 13, 2008
Hi Claire, welcome to the site again. When I started reading this, I thought it sounded familiar.

You're the second person this week to point out that there's no "forgot my password" link on here...

I think I need to make that a priority. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Feb 13, 2008



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