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Posted by alilee, Feb 11, 2012. 886 views. ID = 5401


Posted by alilee, Feb 11, 2012. 886 views. ID = 5401
This post was written in 22 minutes.
This post is a Grab Bag which uses the following words: debonair, unsavory, stroke, blearily, brawl, snobbish, rearview mirror, unexpectedly, rhythm and blues, inflexibility

As I was driving along in my car
singing aloud to my rhythm and blues.
wondering so sadly where you now are,
putting myself in your navy suede shoes.

In rearview mirrors reflection I saw
so unexpectedly,blearily you,
debonair always, my feelings were raw
inflexibility striking anew

The last time we met in town was so bad
At a stroke becoming snobbish and loud
an unsavoury brawl which made me mad
our relationship gone like a spring cloud

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