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Tangible Poetry: The Blood Pressure Machine
Posted by Debelovechild, Apr 7, 2011. 1243 views. ID = 4521

Tangible Poetry

Posted by Debelovechild, Apr 7, 2011. 1243 views. ID = 4521
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I am not a poet,
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This blood pressure machine must be broken
I cant seem to get it to work
I am seriously not joking
The thing gone berzerk
Its say her pressure is real low
but I know this cant be
her heart rate is too slow
I better get someone to help me

This machine is broken
its making all this beeping sounds
I am seriously not joking
the numbers keep going up and down
the patient says she feels fine
and cant see why all the fuss
I am going to try it one Last time
It has to work, it simply must

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