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Thanks To You Poetry: Meta Poetry
Posted by joonmymoon, Apr 12, 2010. 1151 views. ID = 3472

Thanks To You Poetry

Posted by joonmymoon, Apr 12, 2010. 1151 views. ID = 3472
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what poetry does to me
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at times when i close my eyes,
I see my little world collide.
and sometimes in a moment full of lies,
everything gets wrapped up inside.

so i say thanks to you,
for turning my heart into words,
for making me pen what is true,
and creating songs as pretty as a bird's.

at times when i close my eyes,
butterflies kiss sparks of happy clouds.
and sometimes in a moment of surprise,
my hearts full of love speaks so loud.

so i say thanks to you,
for giving beauty to everything,
for leaving no room for me to be blue,
and humming a new song for my soul to sing.

whatever would i do without you?


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Comments


Laura
Apr 12, 2010
Very nice! Lovely metaphors :-)
   ~Posted by Laura, Apr 12, 2010

joonmymoon
Apr 12, 2010
thanks Laura!
   ~Posted by joonmymoon, Apr 12, 2010

Elizabeth L
Apr 14, 2010
Lovely poem - so simple and real.
   ~Posted by Elizabeth L, Apr 14, 2010



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