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circus

by rabia

hope you like my story

The following is a piece of writing submitted by rabia on January 10, 2010
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circus


‘Oh god its 7’0 clock’I wash up myself and get ready for the school think of a beautiful circus in my mind .Mom was calling me for the breakfast. I am going down to stairs. Mom was standing and wishes me good morning. I saw my mom face having a sweet smile on her face as expressing the lot of care for me. I answered with a smile,” Good morning MOM”. After breakfast walking along the street and bye my mom in the middle of my way is saw that circus having the peaceful environment as looking different as it saw in the day time. Now I make a decision to go on the circus today after my school time. First I want to see the sweet face of my Miss Bella. She is such a cute and nice person. She takes our science period. After end of the period I agree that Miss Bella is such an intelligent teacher as I ever see.
Nini came ‘hello misty how r u’ she said. ‘I am fine like a shining sun in the sky’. Nini is my best friend which I share every moment of my life. She is so sweet like a fragment of flowers, like a bird flying in the air, she is like fresh feeling of wind of morning.
Nini break my thoughts ‘now you think about that circus which you really like’. I saw her pretty face as she know my feeling about the circus. The circus is looking like the happiness is collected keeping the smiles of the people. Sorrow is somewhere gone away from that place like cool water where fishes live with a joy.
‘I will make a plan to go there because it was a great fun what you say about it’,
‘Okay if you want I will go there’ I smiled.
After school they walk towards the circus and suddenly Nini stopped at the gate
‘What happen Nini lets go’?
‘I feel something wrong there are bad indications of something’
‘Cmon Nini doesn’t feel fear let’s go okay you can go I will wait for you here. Okay don’t worry I will come back’ misty said.
After ten minutes she came towards her ‘let’s go in the room what is inside in the room ‘please misty don’t go there’ Nini was feel so much fear.
‘O please come with me and don’t disappointed me’
‘Okay let’s go’.
‘Welcome girls in the game of horror the man said sitting in the corner of the room so there are many colorful cards in front of him in the table.
‘I want to play it’.
‘Think again girl this game is so dangerous and weak girls did not play and you must end the game if you leave you will be dead’.
‘Who cares…? I want to play it so I will play it’.
Done you will decide to play It now go inside the another room
‘Let’s go Nini’ I turn back she is not there.
‘Where is my friend’?
‘It is just the formality we take your friend which mean you can’t skip the game until you will end it as I told you it is very dangerous game it’s a possibility both of you will be dead or there is possibility that both of you alive with end of this game so best of luck’.
‘You trap us, who you are’ I shouted.
‘My name is Foster some people considered me as a devil I was the owner of the death game’.
‘What you want from us’ I surprised.
‘I just want the life of you two girls it’s a game for you to play for your life if you won you put back your life if you loose I will take your life. The game is simple there are five stages in the game. In every stage you should choose one color card from many colorful cards and the game depends what the card you choose. In the end of each stage you find the clue. Remember there is bonus and death card you should have to find if your luck works. Best of luck your game starts now’.
Foster vanishes suddenly. I feel I am in the room and the cards are flow in the air. Foster appear again’ its time for stage one now choose any one card. Remember in the end of the stage you find the clue’.
What I will do my mind does not reach any matter but for Nini, I have to play it. I pick the purple color card.
‘Quite lucky now face the trouble’. Foster laugh.
Then I feel there is another room, some robots came towards me quickly there hand fill with fire arms, turbid now I suppose to using something to stop them, before they blast me into many pieces. There is some marble in my pocket, I throw on them. They slip I quickly off their buttons in one robot I found a clue.
“DANGER IS NOT A DANGER”
Then Foster appears again and shows me the cards this time I choose yellow. Now I realize it is some sort of computer game. Now choosing yellow card Foster tell me to find the path to go in the centre.

The following is a piece of writing submitted by rabia on January 10, 2010
"hope you like my story"

circus

There are many sticks in the room and continuously moving here and there next one is moving in opposite direction. Now its time to take best move, I take step one the stick is inside but the other stick is also moving. Now I jumped next but the gap is coming there is square shape well in between the sticks and I suddenly jumped on it and reach another room. Foster came and tells me that I reach very quickly in that stage I found the second clue is on my foot and I quickly read it. It was written” WORST THING IS NOT WORST IN ACTUAL”. In the third segment I choose red card and I unconsciously came in front of room. I suddenly sit in a second. There was blade passed upon me if I were stand I will sure to cut into half. Now I realize in the centre there is a button to stop the blade but I must have to reach in a centre. I creep towards the centre and near reach the centre. I suddenly jumped it when blade is passed, thanks to my aerobic skills. I push the button the blade will stop. I take the clue it was written” RUIN YOUR LIFE FOR THE SAKE OF SOME GAIN”.

The following is a piece of writing submitted by rabia on January 12, 2010

circus last part

Now segment four comes and it become almost harder for me to play my whole body is paining but due to sake of my life, I must have done it for me and Nini. Again I choose the card. This time I choose orange color card. ‘Lucky girl you get the bonus card, clue is written behind the card'. The clue is “BURN THE CARD THE EVIL WILL DIE”.
‘Finally you play with me girl. It never happen that any person reach at this stage. Now choose the card but remember in the cards there is only one card which can save your life. You have realized what are bad cards so keep away from them’.
‘Wait let’s do some conversation’ I said.
‘What you want’ Foster said.
‘First show me my friend’.
‘She is save now playing the game’.
‘What I say, show me’?
Foster clap and Nini appears with tied hands.
‘Okay now I will satisfy’. Now this time I choose the black card.
‘I tell you its worst card why did you choose?’ Foster laughed.
‘It’s my choice’.
‘Now you face the dead. Both of you will die’
‘May be you are wrong. Its time to declare your death…. Good bye and Marry charismas’ I throw the black card on fire. Foster whole body starts burning then he vanished.
‘Nini get out of here the whole building is destroying’. We quickly ran outside from the circus. Whole circus is burning.
‘Tell me how you kill that devil’ Nini asked.’ It’s easy, every clue help me to make the way how to kill him.
‘Oh now tell me do you go any circus again’.
‘Sure’ I smiled.

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